11.6.10

When you said "I love you"
it makde me smile.
But deep inside,
my heart was screaming "Don't break me anymore!"
I told myself it was true,
just as true as the ocean is blue.
Learing to live half alive,
I thought forsure that I might die.
I was left crumbled and broken,
until you came into my heart.
you built me up and put me back together again.
for this, i must thankyou.
and may i say, i love you too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 3:30 AM
wow i feel this point so much here massive images thank you for sharing
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