Jay Loveless Poet Narrative

1-15-10 Look Into My Eyes

i caught your eyes on me. dont bother to look away. ive already noticed. i wish i was 
brave enough to stare back. it doesnt bother me, just makes me curious. what are you 
thinking? or are you just observing? try to figure me out. but you wont. because youve 
only met the imposter. you havent stopped to look into my eyes.

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Gypse Summers January 21, 2010 at 1:32 PM whatsbehind anyones eyes is a mystery indeed great writting

Izzy Gumbo January 19, 2010 at 10:20 AM hmm. some fonts didn't come over, but... you get the message. :) Your writing is wonderful. so are you eYes.

Izzy Gumbo January 19, 2010 at 10:18 AM ;) wink et blink... can you be so sure mon amour? ? a??p? µ?? il mio amore mi amor meine Liebe meu amor ... ;)~

Debbie Guzzi January 17, 2010 at 2:05 PM Narrative form I think? Interesting write! Light & Love

G G January 15, 2010 at 3:51 PM i like it!!!

Robert Stevens January 15, 2010 at 12:44 PM Great poem Rain. I think about how people look at me and think what the hell are they thinking, feel like saying just say hello to me and get to know me for a minute and stop looking at the cover. Read the book. Great poem.