1-14-10 To Angels

Angel where are thee? left my side, thou swore your love unto my heart. wilt thee stay 
angered forever? or find forgivness in thee soul, for crimes unheard of. my heart achs, and 
beats the hot liquids, bleeding through my chest....
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August 17, 2012 at 7:41 PM
A sincere yearning for an Angel that can deliver love and also thrust agony into the doubting heart - " wilt thee stay..." if blood is not hot, then it must be dead - I must have read,and re-read,and re-re-read innumerable times this beautifully somber recollection Jay - you are living up to my expectations, no doubt! J.A.B. %
Brown Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Your poetry made excellent reading today Rain. Thank you for sharing. May you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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