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1-13-10 the Wind and the Rose

Tears

      are forming in my eyes

i wanna sit here and cry

                      and feel arms around me

i close my eyes

            breath in deep

the wind closes in around me

           the sweet scent of rose fills my nose

i taste the ocean salt on my lips

                    suddenly, i begin to calm

The tears are dropping like petals

             the cool of waves, washing the frustraition over my head

the warm soothing wind carrying my pain away on its breeze

         friends there to me even when im feeling alone

my peace, my meditation, my heart, my soul

                                   my friends, the wind and the rose

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Logan Saucillo January 14, 2010 at 12:00 PM beautiful display of passion. may these arms wrap around you tightly. filling your heart with serenity. new poem posted =]

Robert Stevens January 14, 2010 at 10:26 AM Wicked poem rain lots of emotion...awesome

Carol Sunshine Brown January 14, 2010 at 5:04 AM I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Rain. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Brooke Snyder January 13, 2010 at 6:11 PM Yes :) i love this and i say do it againn

Joanna Smith January 13, 2010 at 1:12 PM ok i am hearing ya ^_^