10 Word Challenge-2 - the Medicine Man

The QUIESCENT, AMBIVALENT brave ate the BITTERSWEET berries, 
as he listened to the ARCANE canticles of the chief’s INTERCESSOR’S words-
How absurd the man looked with that buffalo hide 
and FLAMBOYANT headdress made from feathers of so many birds-

The QUINTESSENCE of tribal wisdom, claimed that animal IMMOLATIONS 
gave him TACTILE powers with the great spirit – they must fight!
When forced from their LUSCIOUS valleys onto barren reservation lands, 
The brave realized, too late, that the medicine man had always been right!

written for John Hamilton's 10 word contest -
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 8:55 PM
Cenevieve, congratulations on your win you poem is great : ) Hugs Eve
Daniel Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 9:24 AM
A brilliant premise to use those tough ten words, Genevieve:) well done:)
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November 14, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Thank You Much Jo Daniel's...
Stover Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Excellent poem.
Mika-Stevens Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 3:12 PM
I thank you Christy...it was a true challenge....
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