10 Out of 10

Can't wait till the day we exchange I love you's
I see you, you're my favorite view
More picturesque than the prettiest sunset
More beautiful than any I've ever met

He's a Gucci guy in an ordinary world
His smile lights the room as he walks in
Did I see some angel wings?
Did I see a halo?
He's looking like a 10, all the girls mutter amen, amen

My old navy jacket's looking blue
But that Gucci gold's shining bright

It's not just the way you smile
I could be your shoulder to cry on
I feel that connection, a Versace connection
Something's there
I'm love blind, but I can still see the love
I'm deaf, but I can still hear our rapid heartbeats in perfect syncopation
My nerves are crushed, but I can still feel that connection

He's a Gucci guy in an ordinary world
His smile lights the room as he walks in
Did I see some angel wings?
Did I see a halo?
He's looking like a 10, all the girls mutter amen, amen

My old navy jacket's looking blue
But that Gucci gold's shining bright

You got me with that look
This love is one for the record books
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 11:06 AM
Oh Lana McLoughlin, this poem is great! I have enjoyed it. have a nice day my friend.
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