10 Lines, 5 Words

She has deepest blue eyes
With golden hair to match
Tight fittin' jeans her size
With a little knee patch

I'm in love no doubt
There's nothing else to say
She's all I think about -
On my mind all day

I am a simple man
Doin' the best I can

12/26/2017
For contest 10 Lines, 5 Words Rhyme for Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Smith Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 11:23 PM
And making more sense. Tha half these other jahoo's
Bradfield Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 2:58 PM
Haha..thanks, Charlie!
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