10.18.10

You tried to wear me down,
but guess what?
I'm still smiling.
You may be too,
but baby let me tell you
you won't find another as loving and true.
I tried, you lied.
I loved, you lose.
we're done.
Forever and always (:
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 3:37 AM
i love this piece so much so true you let the have it full point excellent write
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