10.1.10

She tries, tries, and tries again.
Standing there alone and in the dark,
she weeps as he listens thru the cracked door.
not knowing what to do,
she throws her hands up in the air,
she finally gives up.
she lays her head down,
he has finally defeated her.
it's over.
he won.
the end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 3:46 AM
i love this dark poem here so lost in your words my friend
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