0, Vanishing Embrace

...thick clouds descend down,
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Salehi Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 12:43 AM
Beautiful...
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 11:32 PM
Labas vakaras Salamandra (my dad was Lithuanian) .beautiful haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
Bbb Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 1:09 AM
your new Obsessive Orange made me to cross the line with writing my very first comment, indeed dudes were waiting for breakfast, so good to know how to deal with them:D
Bbb Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 12:28 AM
O! Labas Jan, thank you! have found your CLOUDS HAIKU, it was your first one and #1:) this is also my very first one--- also with clouds-- nice coincidence) nice to meet you here! hugs xx
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