01:09 - Half Empty

The stifling rememberance
Of a cataclismic echo
Likes to ricochet around
In the heart I used to know.

There's nothing more than silence
In the space I see as shadow
When the tears have all but gone
And the rest is blackened snow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 30, 2011 at 3:12 PM
Wonderful poetry, I really enjoyed reading your poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
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March 30, 2011 at 4:48 AM
Enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetry this morning Annie. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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