What Makes You Feel

2. When I feel sad that my friend has drifted away..




as your touching silhouette fades with vapor trail, my heart faints in wails

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Len Gasun

Date: 5/7/2025 1:01:00 AM

What makes you feel Contest Judged: 4/9/2025 4:30:00 PM Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury Place 7 (1-10 single winner)

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/10/2025 10:06:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... and your talent likewise. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Len Gasun
Date: 4/26/2025 11:16:00 AM

Belated thank you for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings as well as the warm Chistian greetings my dear poet friend Beata. God bless you always and your writings. I'll visit you and the rest of so soon. God bless. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2025 1:21:00 AM

- Back with a congratulation, Len :) - hugs

Len Gasun
Date: 4/26/2025 11:18:00 AM

Belated thank you for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings as well as the warm Christian greetings my dear poet friend Annelise. God bless you always and your writings. I'll visit you and the rest of so soon. God bless. Hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/9/2025 9:18:00 PM

cheers to you on your fine win, len...amother feather on your cap! huggs

Len Gasun
Date: 4/26/2025 11:20:00 AM

Belated thank you for reading my poem and your congratulatory greeting my dear poet friend and sis. God bless you always and your writings. I'll visit you and the rest of so soon. God bless. Hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/3/2025 1:03:00 PM

ahhh, an evocative write that tugs at the heartstrings, dear len...so well.done as i thank you for sharing your talent!

Len Gasun
Date: 5/7/2025 12:53:00 AM

Welcome and I thank you more my dear poet friend Nette. Hugs