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July 29, 2025, entered in Edward Ibeh’s This or That, Vol 35 Poetry Contest, placed 4th

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Ways of Providence

The young are prone to blithely say, “Time’s on my side,”
but youth’s no promise one will long on Earth abide.

“He died too soon,” we say beside a young one’s grave
and ponder why God opted not his life to save.

Those who have not achieved all they desire in life
sometimes blame others~~even God~~for pain and strife.

Let’s flip the coin. Are we convinced that we deserve
all blessings we receive? Do we have that much nerve?

God’s ways are not our ways; we cannot think like Him,*
but we must trust he doesn’t merely act on whim.
          (*Isaiah 55:8)

His Word assures He loves us; this, we must believe
and have deep faith He’ll comfort us each time we grieve.

When we depart this shell of clay, we’ll clearly see
what we now view as through a glass dark as can be.”
       (I Corin. 13:2, the Apostle Paul)
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Date: 8/10/2025 9:41:00 PM
Spiritually satisfying. Big congrats on the win
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/30/2025 8:22:00 AM
A very belated THANKS, Andrea! Janice
Date: 8/9/2025 4:34:00 PM
This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. It is true we have no idea how long we will live. We never know when the last minute will be. Sara K
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/9/2025 4:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Date: 7/31/2025 12:03:00 PM
What a powerful write you have here. We can find it hard to talk to others. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away.................
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/3/2025 5:39:00 AM
Yes, I am VERY careful about what I say to bereaved people. Thanks, Paula. Janice
Date: 7/29/2025 11:06:00 AM
I was just talking to a loved one (verse 3) and they don’t want to hear about God. So hard. May God bless you, Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/29/2025 2:56:00 PM
Talking to loved ones about God can be quite challenging. THANKS so much, Kim. Janice
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