The Seed Of Fear Poetry Contest- Sponsored by Jami Patterson "There was an woman who lived in a shoe- fairytale"
There was an old woman who lived in a shoe She had so many children, she didn't know what to do So, she tied up some children with her shoelaces Even the boy who wore his leg braces She put them all down, in the cellar with no light And chopped off the head of one child every night The mean old woman was cold and bereft She killed them all till there was one child left It was the boy with the braces; he watched all the kids die But for some scary mannered reason- the boy didn't cry He found the unlucky old woman; tucked in her bed Then he beat her with his shoe; made sure she was dead When he knew she was dead, 'He -sat with a smile- And shouted out loud!! "I'm Satan, It's Been Me... all this while"
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