The Day the Beast Lost

I woke each break with cast a shadow on my chest,
a nameless weight that stole my needed rest.
It spoke in lies I dared not try to fight,
and turned the morning darker than the night.

I laughed in rooms so no one saw the ache,
while every smile felt brittle, thin, and fake.
It fed on doubt, on all I held in fear,
until my hope grew faint then disappeared.
And saw not ruin but a quiet resurrection.
A spark within me, stubborn, fierce, and small,
whispered, rise now…you will not fall.

I never struck it down with a conqueror's sword—
I just smply prevented confiding the fibs it made.
I stood unarmored yet would not yield—
my heart-- the only weapon I could wield.

It roared, it clawed, but I refused to bend;
its reign of silence met a sudden end.
And in that breath, my life was rearranged—
The day the beast cut down, was the day I changed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 8/14/2025 8:46:00 AM
I don't understand the first line, but I love the rest. I understand what the poem is dramatically saying and relate. I love the emotional depth you conveyed which is right on for the slaying of the beast. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/14/2025 9:36:00 AM
Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words. I understand the first line might be a little confusing—its intention was to capture that moment of waking with an emotional weight lingering on the chest, almost like the “beast” is still there at the start of the day.
Date: 8/14/2025 3:24:00 AM
It would be liberating to have one's beast removed, Rowena. The last line says it all. Sometimes though, they might attempt to make you lose all credibility, so is it really worth the effort? I'd say yes, for it can somewhat help to recover one's peace of mind? It's a tough row to hoe. Wishing the best to you! Mikki
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 8/14/2025 3:30:00 AM
Thank you. :)
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/14/2025 3:27:00 AM
Thank you, Mikki. Yes, it can be a hard path to walk, but peace of mind is always worth the effort. Even if the beast tries to take away credibility, standing firm helps keep the spirit whole. I truly appreciate your kind wishes. Wishing you the same strength and serenity in your own journey.
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