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Summer Haiku

the heat is now on
thank God for the cool A/C
heading for a pool

funsummersunupliftingwaterhaiku

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/3/2025 4:47:00 PM

Love the contrast here between summer heat and its relief! I hope your day is nice. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2025 8:03:00 AM

Thanks for your support here. Glad you love my fun "Summer Haiku" write. It is way toooooo hot here. Come on fall... Hope your day is fun and cool as you write away..........

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/24/2025 3:50:00 PM

This is real Truth! Excellent Haiku!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2025 11:17:00 AM

Thanks for your support here. Glad you found my fun "Summer Haiku" to be an, Excellent Haiku. Summer here is way toooooo hot here. Come on Fall and cool us off. Hope your day is fun and cool as you write away..........

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 6/21/2025 4:34:00 PM

Gosh, where would we be without A/C. Cute Haiku...enjoy your weekend, yellow rose

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2025 11:12:00 AM

Thanks for your support here. Glad you found my fun "Summer Haiku" to be a, Cute Haiku. Summer here is way toooooo hot. Yes, we need A/C. Come on Fall and cool us off. Hope your day is fun and cool as you write away..........

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2025 3:29:00 PM

Hi Paula! I can feel the heat emanating from your summer haiku! That never bothered me, but now I try to avoid the sun after learning from experience how cruel it can be :( ~ Best regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2025 10:59:00 AM

Thanks for your support here. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Summer Haiku" write. It is way toooooo hot here. The sun can be fun and cruel at the same time. Not good for skin. Hope your day is fun and cool as you write away..........

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/19/2025 8:50:00 PM

It is a good way to cool off. A good point.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/20/2025 10:56:00 AM

Thanks for your support here. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Summer Haiku" write. It is way toooooo hot here. I have never had a pool but would have loved one. Come on fall. Hope your day is fun and cool as you write away..........

Len Gasun

Date: 6/19/2025 3:08:00 PM

You captured summer in your gorgeous haiku my dear poet friend Paula! I always feel summer in my place and I only have the swimming pool but not AC. Too old and no longer working. Thanks for sharing this awesome summer haiku. Good luck in the contest dear. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/20/2025 10:54:00 AM

Thanks for your support here. Glad you found my fun "Summer Haiku" to be an, awesome summer haiku. Also thanks for your, Good luck in the contest. Summer here is way toooooo hot. I have never had a pool but would have loved one. Stay Cool. Hugs...Hope your day is fun and cool as you write away..........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/19/2025 1:53:00 AM

- Sounds wonderful, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/19/2025 10:11:00 AM

Thanks for your support here. Also thanks for your, Best wishes in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Summer Haiku" write. I enjoyed writing this fun summer write. Toooooo hot here. Hugs... Hope your day is fun and cool as you write away..........

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/19/2025 1:30:00 AM

Is it hot? You bet it is. I'm slowly dying :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/19/2025 10:08:00 AM

Thanks for your support here. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Summer Haiku" write. I enjoyed writing this fun summer write. Way toooooo hot here. Come on Fall. Hope your day is fun and cool as you write away..........

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/18/2025 6:35:00 PM

Great imagery, Paula. Your haiku is enjoyable to read

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/19/2025 10:07:00 AM

Thanks for your support here. Glad you found my fun "Summer Haiku" to have, Great imagery. Summer here is way toooooo hot. It was fun to write. Hope your day is fun and cool as you write away..........

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 6/18/2025 6:02:00 PM

Good one Paula. Gotta keep cool

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/19/2025 10:04:00 AM

Thanks for your support here. Glad you found my fun "Summer Haiku" to be a, Good one. Yes, Gotta keep cool. Way toooooo hot here. It was fun to write. Hope your day is fun and cool as you write away..........

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/18/2025 5:32:00 PM

Cool’n off! Enjoyed!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/19/2025 10:01:00 AM

Thanks for your support here. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Summer Haiku" write. It is way toooooo hot here. Come on fall. Hope your day is fun and cool as you write away..........

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/18/2025 5:12:00 PM

When I got old and saggy plus I now get too out of breath to swim, I decided that swimming is for a those a decade or two younger. LOL..I enjoyed reading this one. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/19/2025 9:56:00 AM

Thanks for your support here. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Summer Haiku" write. I enjoyed swimming a lot as a kid, not so much now. Toooooo hot out. Hope your day is fun and cool as you write away..........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2025 3:52:00 PM

Yes. That's what summer is about.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/19/2025 9:53:00 AM

Thanks for your support here. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Summer Haiku" write. I enjoyed writing this fun one about summer. Hope your day is fun and cool as you write away..........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/18/2025 2:24:00 PM

Summer Haiku ~ Date Written:6/18/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet......