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           the moon shines above
       snow crunches under my feet
              senses highlight dark

Heidi Sands

2/11/25

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moonnightsnowhaiku

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Mike Bayles

Date: 2/23/2025 10:45:00 AM

You recreated a wonderful experience

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/23/2025 10:51:00 AM

Thank you Mike. I appreciate your comment :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/12/2025 3:35:00 PM

Hello Heidi, A beautiful scene you painted your poem with words. /Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/14/2025 12:46:00 PM

Hello heidi, you are very welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2025 3:52:00 PM

Thank you very much Darlene. Hugs :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/12/2025 1:16:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your "Senses" write. I can see it all and feel the snow. Stay warm. Hugs... Hope you have a fun day today and on Valentine's Day.................

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2025 3:52:00 PM

Thank you Paula. I appreciate your kind comments. I hope you have a happy Valentines Day too. Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/12/2025 6:41:00 AM

- A lovely cold winter night, Heidi :) - hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2025 6:42:00 AM

Yes. It was pretty. Thank you . Hugs :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/11/2025 11:18:00 AM

What a haiku! I could almost hear the sounds of foot steps.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2025 11:33:00 AM

Thank you Victor. Great! :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 2/11/2025 6:50:00 AM

Lovely poem lovely Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2025 7:19:00 AM

Thank you Abdullah :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/11/2025 5:48:00 AM

a pretty ku

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2025 5:54:00 AM

Thank you Kim :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/11/2025 5:05:00 AM

Ohhh, this is quite an atmospheric and picturesque haiku with a deep sense of sentiment layered beneath! I love how you've painted the imagery of the moon along with snow ~ also, describing its soft crunching sound! Indeed very creative! "Senses highlight dark" What a profound ending.. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light and best wishes always, hope you are doing well.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2025 5:15:00 AM

Thank you very much for the kind, positive feedback. I hope you have a great day :)

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