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Seaside Break


ocean
curtains

torn bed
salt scents

my eyes
rip tide

footprints
shore fixed

water
spiller

seagulls
cry, girl

she churns
the surf

angstbeachdeepdesireintrospectionfootle

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2025 2:04:00 AM

I enjoyed reading these. Footprints was my favorite

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/17/2025 7:56:00 AM

ohh, your being floats with this sea of thoughts, paige!

Ghairo Daniels

Date: 9/15/2025 11:31:00 PM

Exquisite, girl ! The way you’ve woven sea into home into emotion speaks volumes of your consciousness. Churning the surf > Wow ! Footprints shore fix > wow again. Paige, you are a genius poetess. I intend for you to know it. Xx.

Krishika Upadhyay

Date: 9/15/2025 7:35:00 PM

Such a raw and haunting piece the brevity makes each word crash like a wave, leaving its echo behind. I could feel the sea’s pull and the ache hidden in its tides. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Rowena Velasco

Date: 9/15/2025 6:04:00 PM

Such a vivid snapshot of the sea! I love how the imagery flows like the waves—reminds me to embrace life’s movement and find beauty even in chaos.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/15/2025 11:23:00 AM

Paige, you have captured the swaying cadence of the sea! Wonderfully composed footles! Blessings!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/14/2025 6:06:00 PM

I can feel this one

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/14/2025 5:52:00 PM

wonderful and sensitive, enjoyed, i live near seashore, feel that

CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/14/2025 3:29:00 PM

I have read this 4 times and each time I got more and more from it. You have a very clever brain w/ a deep creative twist that I enjoy trying to 'follow.' Enjoyed this, Paige. Poetry hugs ... CayCay