Saint Nickles

In a far off place in a cold cold land there lived a man called Mr. Mack. The place he lived in was called Kirkland Lake. Kirkland Lake was small as cities go, but it was big in heart. I think living in cold places makes people chip in to help each other. You know, like shoveling a neighbors walkway or bringing someone a nice warm cup of coffee. Sometimes it was helping boost a car or pulling them out of a snow bank. 

Mind you, sometimes people were not so nice. That’s where Mr. Mack fits into our story. You see, Mr. Mack was kind of a sad case. He had once been a business man but he suffered a nervous breakdown. He had spent time in what everyone called “The Nut House” in North Bay. Now those were different times in the late 60s, we all didn’t know much about mental illness back then. You know how it is, people are afraid of what they don’t understand. Maybe we thought it was catching or something.

Mr. Mack used to walk up and down Government Rd West talking to himself. Not much of what he was saying could be understood. Some of us kids thought it was funny but for the most part we just ignored him. Mr. Mack would try to go into restaurants to have a cup of coffee but he would get kicked out. The owners didn’t want him disturbing their customers. Mind you, sometimes he did smell kinda bad. Still it was a sad state of affairs. 

My parents owned a small diner called The Coffee Cup, it was located across the street from The Strand Theatre. My dad had a Barbershop at the back of the Diner. Sometimes dad would cut Mr. Mack’s hair. If Mr. Mack was smelling bad my dad would let him know. A few days later Mr. Mack would show up in fresh clothes and looking good. He was proud to show himself off. My parents always let him come in for Coffee and would give him one of the day old Donuts warmed up by the microwave. Mr. Mack was always appreciative. 

One year my Dad gave Mr. Mack a Red Santa Suit. Mr. Mack wore it over his clothing. It also came with a white beard and a red hat with a Pom Pom. I still remember how proud Mr. Mack was to wear it. To my recollection I think that was the first time I witnessed Mr. Mack smile. His white hair went well with the colour of the beard. For the first time I noticed his blue eyes. They looked quite sparkly when he smiled. 

A little ways up Government road was where the Royal Bank was located. Mr. Mack Sauntered up to the bank. In his hand he held his Blue Royal Bank bank book. I thought it was cool because it had a Gold Lion on the cover. A few minutes later, Mr. Mack came out of the bank with several rolls of nickels in his hand. He sat on the curb and thoughtfully removed the brown wrappers from each of the rolls of nickels. He then placed those nickels in the pockets of his Santa Suit. I have to say, I was quite curious what he was up to.

Mr. Mack proceeded to walk up and down Government Rd West and every time he saw a little kid he would hand them a nickel. Mr. Mack did this for the whole week leading up to Christmas Day. He made a lot of Kirkland Lake kids very happy. In those days a kid could get a lot of candies for a nickel. As a result of his kindness, he earned the name Saint Nickels. After that all the kids knew Mr. Mack and he always had a smile on his face when they said hi. Yes Kirkland Lake is a pretty special place. It’s full of characters, but most importantly it’s full of a lot of wonderful people. Merry Christmas Everyone. Blessings from my new home in Kelowna British Columbia Canada.

Author: Richard Lamoureux
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 12/15/2023 9:02:00 AM
Such a heart warming story, Rick: He sure knew how to get to a kid’s heart. I like the word play on St. Nickels. There was a Mr Malone in our home town who was very thin and earned the nickname Bones Malone. I agree small towns are great. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy 2024. SuZ
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/15/2023 9:04:00 AM
You as well. Thanks for giving my story a read.
Date: 12/2/2023 7:07:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful write/story. Love your line, "In those days a kid could get a lot of candies for a nickel." I still remember Halloween. We had 2 houses. One gave a dime out/one gave 25 cents out. Yes, the coins did go far in those days. Have a great weekend.................
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/2/2023 7:41:00 AM
You as well Paula. Thanks for reading my story.
Date: 12/1/2023 1:40:00 AM
A wonderful story, Rick. Best wishes in your new home, my friend. Charlie
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/1/2023 7:06:00 AM
Thanks Charlie.
Date: 11/30/2023 7:09:00 PM
Your story made me smile, amazing how people remember us by the way we make them feel, in the old days everyone had a nick name, this is a most endearing story, Richard. What a memory !
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2023 9:45:00 PM
Thanks. It is fun to look back.
Date: 11/30/2023 10:20:00 AM
Richard, this prose piece not only deeply touches my heart but speaks to me of my beloved NW! You have captured the spirit of a NW neighborhood perfectly but also have captured the spirit of Christmas in a simple gesture and a story of new life! Beautifully written by a master storyteller! Somehow we have to have a better way of helping people with mental health issues! You so clearly point out the way people with these issues are treated. Thank you for this piece. Merry Christmas to you!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2023 5:33:00 PM
Thanks Sam, I’m glad it brought happy thoughts. Merry Christmas to you as well.
Date: 11/30/2023 9:41:00 AM
This is so touching really what a great and soulful story. He is such a nice and generous man for once he was accepted by all and its sad what he went through i can only imagine how people would have reacted to his mental health issues. Breaks my heart but the ending made me relieved atleast. A fave this is for me . Pleasure reading
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Date: 11/30/2023 5:35:00 PM
We moved away and I have no idea what became of him. Thanks for adding your kind thoughts.
Date: 11/30/2023 7:03:00 AM
Great storytelling Richard..
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Date: 11/30/2023 5:35:00 PM
Thanks my friend.
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