Proud To Serve

I’m proud to serve, that’s true as hell,
But sometimes I wonder why we’re here to rebel—
Not against the mission, not against the fight,
But the brass and the game that fogs up the right.
They say it’s a brotherhood, shoulder to shoulder,
But I see ‘em slicked up, gettin' rank over the bolder.
The ones who dodge grime, fresh-pressed and clean,
In their service dress blues, their polished-up sheen.
Some troops in coveralls, sweat-stained and tired,
Running two shifts while the "heroes" retired,
To volunteer for cake duty, handin' out smiles,
While we’re on the line, racking up miles.
The shop’s down to bone, mission load is high,
And we’re the ones grindin’ while the brown-nosers fly.
They get the medals and accolades—so absurd,
For fixing their collars and kissing up to the third.
I don’t care for the politics, the backroom cheers,
I don’t work for the lapel pins or selective ears.
But there’s pride in the dirt, in the scuffed-up boots,
Where real service lives, where honor takes roots.
I’ll keep pulling weight, watch their parades pass,
Nods and awards for a well-polished brass.
And yeah, it gets old, watching them rise,
When the dirty and smelly, they pass right by.
But proud to serve—I don’t need their praise,
For a job well done, for these long hard days.
Just wonderin’ sometimes why it’s this way—
When the heart of the mission is the boots in the fray.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 6/25/2025 8:36:00 PM
Amen. Those bootlickers sure know how to keep their skirts clean, don't they? ~ gw
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Danny Derden
Date: 6/26/2025 6:21:00 AM
Oh, I was going to say that if you liked this one you should check out SIDEWAYS...another look back at my time in uniform. I published a small book of military related poetry titled COMBAT BOOT POETRY...it's on Amazon/Kindle if you are interested.
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Danny Derden
Date: 6/26/2025 6:19:00 AM
Saw it far, far too often...and sadly too many in leadership could never see past the spit shine to realize they weren't worth spit.
Date: 6/25/2025 2:12:00 PM
Love this one, Danny! You describe service life to a "T". The guys in the trenches are the ones who keep things moving! I know the service pretty well since I served in the AF 30 years and retired as a Chief Master Sergeant. Best to you - Bob H
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 6/25/2025 4:38:00 PM
Thanks for your service, Danny. There are always a few a-holes around who make life misierable for the rest of us! Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H
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Danny Derden
Date: 6/25/2025 2:35:00 PM
25 years myself Chief. Got tangled up with a bad 0-6 and topped out at E7...but I was still standing after the Colonel got relieved of command so there's that!
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