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Photography ~ Anna Selezneva

If You Are Poetry

If you are Poetry,
- an atlas
Pina Coladas, my escape . .
why do moments taunt me,
your canvas,
sentences that have taken shape?

If you are Poetry,
- a scribble
lyrics of, just the way you are,
how is your symphony
visible
. . when you feel like a distant star?

If you are Poetry,
- my whole world
then, I want to know what love is,
take my hand and show me
words uncurled . .
am I worthy of you, of bliss?


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  * Just a little Scribble *
   ~ Needing to know ~ 

Form of Poetry (Tri-fall)

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Songs:

Rupert Holmes - (Escape) The Pina Colada Song
Billy Joel - Just the way you are
Foreigner - I Want To Know What Love Is

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Steve Harvell Date: 8/12/2025 11:44:00 AM I am poetry, write me in the rhythm of words or perhaps not our time is smooth upon each others arms. Just know my love is strong in you the breath of my heart flourish. Love, like a symphony in desert with no one hear my soul cries hungers thirst. Cause you are there I exist because you love, I have found also my depths to have life. Login to Reply Steve Harvell Date: 8/14/2025 5:20:00 PM Thanks Brandy, was hoping catch your soul upon the stars of moonlight skies. Whisper, as if the breeze spoke itself. Not my words you feel in touch but the nibble of my lips caressing your curves. For beauty is loves own music that we sing night air of our fallen hearts. ?? Brandy Nicole Date: 8/13/2025 12:37:00 PM Steve, your comment is so beautiful and poetic. You've captured the delicate theme within. Moments caress the page like a love song. Someone like me, longs to always feel a whisper of words softly touching the skin. I appreciate your lovely thoughts. :) Hugs, Brandy

Running Wolves Date: 10/3/2020 9:41:00 PM When we write poetry we expose a little bit of ourselves to the world. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/4/2020 6:35:00 AM Yes. And my heart is here upon the page. Thank you Robert. :) Brandy

Lindsay Laurie Date: 5/31/2020 7:49:00 PM Hello Brandy … the world revolves around poetry. So much is said in so few words about ourselves - thank you Brandy - Lindsay Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/31/2020 9:18:00 PM Hi Lindsay. You are right, poetry is all around us. :) I smile knowing that fact. Thank you for reading this little scribble of mine. My best to you. :) Brandy

Timothy Hicks Date: 5/4/2020 2:41:00 AM Another gem. And again ... your words dance on the edge of experiencing love full force ... and standing a mile back. It's that state of limbo that makes it interesting. You write in an engaging matter. As a side note: Just the Way You Are is one of Billy Joel's best songs! Loved that one (however ... you really ought to stop seducing me with these photo accompaniments ... LOL!) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 5/4/2020 8:35:00 PM Timothy, your thoughts curl gently around me. Such a wonderful thing to say, about me and my poetry. Thank you for all your kind words and compliments. I am blushing. :) I have always liked this song by Billy Joel. I wanted to use it in my poem. It's cool that you noticed. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 4/21/2020 8:07:00 AM One can sense your love of music my friend in this write and in many of your previous ones - whatever style you attempt, you bring the poem to life, Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/21/2020 8:13:00 PM Dear Jennifer, such a wonderful thing to say. Yes, I love lingering in music. I appreciate you and your kind words. Many blessings to you. :) Brandy

Ralph Sergi Date: 4/5/2020 9:27:00 AM Hi Brandy: A very unique poem comprising poems . I loved each line! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 4/5/2020 5:52:00 PM Hi Ralph, so kind of you to stop by and read this little scribble of mine. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/31/2020 12:34:00 PM A great way to use three songs. You pen was singing and drinking as it was writing. Enjoy your day.............. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/31/2020 3:05:00 PM Dear Paula, so kind of you to say. I enjoy the inspiration that music brings. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy

Joseph May Date: 3/27/2020 8:49:00 AM "How is your symphony visible when you feel like a distant star", Wonderful write Brandy Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/27/2020 4:25:00 PM Sometimes that happens. Being visible, but feeling so far away. Thank you Joseph. Take care my dear friend. ~ Brandy

Harry Horsman Date: 3/27/2020 12:43:00 AM And hand in hand they walk together, into love, a love of this wonderful poetry... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/27/2020 3:58:00 PM Such a beautiful thought. Thank you Harry, for your lovely comment. You and your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

Lewis Raynes Date: 3/25/2020 11:34:00 PM A beautiful question... and some great answers... and hell yeah, I love getting caught in the rain- its a reason to dance Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/26/2020 1:42:00 PM Thank you Lewis. :) And being in the waters touch, is a favorite of mine. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/25/2020 9:13:00 PM Hi Brandy, this is a poetic gem that sings straight into the heart. your gentle words paint the most beautiful canvas. Your creativity sings in this wonderful write. For one, with such a tender heart as you possess, you are worthy of love's bliss. Your heart should be made to smile, always. I love the content of this excellent write, a symphony from the heart. This has been a joy to read, Brandy. May your heart ever sing. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX. A fav Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/25/2020 10:04:00 PM Dear Mike, so kind of you to read this little scribble of mine. It is lyrical and from the heart. Your thoughts wrap softly around me. Such a wonderful thing to say. I appreciate you and your kindness. Thank you for placing this in your favorites. May your heart ever sing as well. My best to you. :) Brandy

John Watt Date: 3/24/2020 3:48:00 PM Love your new write, Brandy. The structure, the great love songs referenced, the coy Brandyness of it all. Canvas, symphony, words uncurled, all the lovely arts of love. Yes, you are poetry. Yes, you are worth the bliss. Be well ~ John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/24/2020 8:21:00 PM Oh my! Thank you John. I am in awe with your wonderful comment. Yes, I am blushing with you saying all of this. I appreciate you, all your kind words and compliments. Deep sigh. :) Brandy

John Watt Date: 3/24/2020 1:09:00 PM "I don't want clever conversation / I never want to work that hard / I just want someone that I can talk to / I want you just the way you are" *wink* Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/24/2020 2:36:00 PM ;) A wink to you. Yes, this song by Billy Joel, is a favorite of mine. "I want you just the way you are" And that is how it should be. Thank you John. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Panagiota Romios Date: 3/23/2020 11:47:00 AM Love the photo, the music...and your magic strung it all together in a poetic bow. Panagiotaxx Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/23/2020 8:11:00 PM I appreciate your wonderful comment. Thank you Panagiota. My best to you. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/23/2020 9:13:00 AM I enjoy your artistic scribbles. Hugs Rick. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/23/2020 8:11:00 PM Thank you Rick. So kind of you to read this little scribble of mine. :) Hugs, Brandy

Winged Warrior Date: 3/23/2020 5:25:00 AM Lovely musical scribble Brandy...only you can do my friend...I see you like the back seat lol...hope you're staying safe through these troubling times...all the best from the Wingster...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/23/2020 8:09:00 PM Music, me and poetry. :) Indeed. Thank you my Warrior with Wonderful Wings. I appreciate you and your thoughts. I am doing well. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/22/2020 4:52:00 PM Nicely said! Love the reference to piña coladas having been in high school when the song came out. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/22/2020 6:48:00 PM Many songs caress my thoughts these days. That one- it has a catchy tune. Thank you Kim. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

Silent One Date: 3/22/2020 10:58:00 AM You are worthy of bliss... Everyone is .. love your scribbles.... Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/22/2020 6:46:00 PM Thank you Silent One. So kind of you to say. Many blessings to you. :) Brandy

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 3/21/2020 9:58:00 AM You are a tender poetry with the taste of sweet beautiful words! You are able to dip your world of poetry into a beautiful reality! A unique poetry and a great pleasure to read! Dear Brandy, thank you so much for sharing beauty and bliss despite a tarnished ambience. Blessings to you. Love and hugs. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/21/2020 8:24:00 PM Dear Besma, you know me so well. Your kind words wrap softly around me and my heart. My eyes are misty, in good way. Thank you my sweet friend. I am so thankful that we have met here. You have such a wonderful heart. Many wonderful blessings to you. Stay safe. Hugs and Love, Brandy

John Gondolf Date: 3/21/2020 7:56:00 AM You are definitely worthy, Brandy, beautiful words from a beautiful heart. Your scribbles always lift my spirit. All my best to you. Hugs, John Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/21/2020 8:14:00 PM Thank you John, for saying I am worthy. I appreciate you and your friendship. Such a wonderful thing to say, about me and my poetry. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/21/2020 7:27:00 AM Beautiful poetry Brandy--loved how you articulated in emotive words feelings of love --much enjoyed the tone and questing posture. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/21/2020 8:12:00 PM Emotions of the heart linger lightly upon the page. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you Vijay. You are a blessing here. Thank you for being You. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael Date: 3/21/2020 7:15:00 AM Scribble scribble scribble...only you can answer this...responsibility is not for another ...your bliss is in your kiss... Nice one...questions many ask themselves Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 3/21/2020 8:05:00 PM I like scribbling outside the lines. You are right, many ask questions such as these- it is within each individual to answer them. Your thoughts are soft and poetic. Thank you Arturo. :) Brandy