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7.49am  October 15,2024

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Haunted House



On a Halloween dusk I was given the main task To make a vlog of a huge haunted house And the camera man was my spouse. So right at hot Halloween night When dog’s howls preluded the full moon light We slowly opened the dusty heavy door But chills drilled down our bones to the core. Welcomed by the black curtains of cobweb Right there in our eyes, so hard to believe! Over ten skeletons were loosely hanging At the house’s roof with hole, no ceiling. When I started to speak on my microphone Background on cam turned out as dancing bones Harsh voices over mine saying, “Leave this place!” So, we dropped our things and ran out in a race.
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Date: 11/3/2024 3:10:00 AM
Nice scary poem Len. congratulations. Thanks for visiting my page. Maria
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Date: 11/3/2024 2:35:00 AM
Haunted House, Haunted Cemetery or Haunted Woods 16 Lines of Rhyme Place: 3 (up to 4 multi-w & 1 HM)
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Date: 10/27/2024 9:20:00 PM
oh! lovely. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/3/2024 2:36:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poem, your uplifitng comment and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend thriveni. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 10/27/2024 8:25:00 AM
Len, a great spooky tale, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Len Gasun
Date: 11/3/2024 2:52:00 AM
Thank you for my win my dear poet friend Tania. Your approval on my poem through my winning place means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 10/15/2024 1:41:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Haunted House" write/story with a great picture. I do Not do Halloween. Hugs...  Have a wonderful Autumn day writing away.................
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/15/2024 7:38:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by reading my poem my dearest poet friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it. In my birthcoutry we don't celebrate Halloween, but here , we celebrate in school with exquisite costumes. But I always use improvised/recycled materials for mine. Have a wonderful Autumn day too. God bless. Hugs
Date: 10/15/2024 12:55:00 PM
what a horror story indeed Len, i am not a Halloween/ horror fan, but i enjoyed your poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/15/2024 7:24:00 PM
Thank you so much my dearest poet friend Jan for reading my poem and your encouraging words. I'm glad you enjoyed my fiction horror story. Thanks a lot again. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 10/15/2024 11:41:00 AM
Hi dearest Len! What a scary tale! Sent chills up and down my spine! Great work setting the scene This is a real Halloween tale! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings dearest poet!
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/15/2024 7:09:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and for finding my idea scary my dearest poet friend Sam. Thank you so much for the encouraging words, best wishes and blessings. Poetry is one of my past times or form of relaxation on breaktime. Best wishes an blessings to you as well.
Date: 10/14/2024 8:37:00 PM
Now THAT would sure scare the Dickens out of ya. Good one. I finished mine, but I needed more verses to make it better. It's not posted yet
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/15/2024 9:44:00 AM
Thanks for reading my poem my dearest poet friend Andrea. I wrote it after waking up in the morning. If I've not checked the requirement/rule I kept on writing telling fictional events beyond 16 lines. So I hope you will post yours soon. I can't wait to read it. Hope, tomorrow? Thanks again for stopping by. Blessings. Hugs
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