Fragility

Two dormice, frozen;
victims of an early frost;
huddled for last warmth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/20/2025 8:54:00 AM
Back with congrats. Way to go!
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Date: 9/20/2025 7:38:00 AM
There's a striking image.
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Date: 9/20/2025 5:46:00 AM
Tragic. The haiku captures a quiet death in nature’s chill, where innocence meets the unforgiving edge of seasonal change.
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/20/2025 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Danny
Date: 9/20/2025 5:04:00 AM
Terry, congratulations on your win. A great haiku.
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/20/2025 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Tania
Date: 9/19/2025 4:08:00 PM
aww, how sad...couldn't espape the brutal cold.
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/20/2025 3:39:00 AM
It is a little sad thank you for reading and commenting
Date: 9/19/2025 1:12:00 AM
So sad to think of them frozen like that. Good one
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/19/2025 7:38:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 9/18/2025 10:39:00 PM
huddling against chill of winter, what a stirring image, terry!
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/19/2025 7:38:00 AM
It is a bit visual, thank you Nette
Date: 9/18/2025 1:15:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Fragility" Haiku write. Winter will be here before we know it... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a Blessed day writing away..........
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/19/2025 7:38:00 AM
Thank you Paula
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