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Contest: Light Up The Lanterne Contest

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

Date: June 19, 2025  5.30am

 

fireworks

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                               ***    \     *    \   loud   /   /   *****
                        **----*----*---- \    blow ups   /---*----*-----**
                     ***----*----*---- rain bright stars---*----*------***
                              *  -----*----deluge my sight -----* ----*----
                                     ***  /    /   /   blast   \   \    \  ***
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Len Gasun Date: 6/28/2025 6:21:00 PM LIGHT UP THE LANTERNE Contest Judged: 6/20/2025 9:09:00 PM Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Place 1 ( up to 6 multi-w) Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 6/28/2025 6:22:00 PM Thanks dear poetess, Nette. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/21/2025 10:56:00 AM - Congratulations on your beautiful Lantern, Len :) - hugs Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 6/22/2025 6:31:00 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Anne-lise. God bless you always. I'll be there in your poetry page soon, promise. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/21/2025 9:12:00 AM Wow. Amazing. You really let it pop. Congrats Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 6/22/2025 6:30:00 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Andrea. Yes, I made it up to look more interesting a bit :) God bless you always. I'll be there in your poetry page soon, promise. Hugs

Beata Agustin Date: 6/21/2025 5:58:00 AM Congrats. Thanks for sharing this... God bless you. Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 6/22/2025 6:28:00 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem, and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend. My pleasure to share it with you. God bless you too. I'll be there in your poetry page soon, promise. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/21/2025 5:38:00 AM Great presentation, Len! Very well done! Congrats on top placement! Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 6/22/2025 6:27:00 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend. God bless you always. I'll be there in your poetry page soon, promise. Hugs

Oliver Mckeithan Date: 6/21/2025 4:05:00 AM Congrats on your placement in this contest with this great shape poem Len Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 6/22/2025 6:26:00 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your warm congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend. God bless you always. I'll be there in your poetry page soon, promise. Hugs