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Ever Sending

a shapely morning holds me longer - -
           longer than expected         
 
  i am aware             
that day needs me there,                                    

   nothing perfected                 

everything bare,         
truth in a stare                     

the afternoon in full bloom- no sense pretending       
   as drops of blue                   
                        are ever sending        

. . keep me in the midnight longer,
      longer than expected                        

i am aware                
  that i am needed there                        
              with you - -                        

each and every syllable second
   is needed too

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~ to be every breath you take, every move you make ~
              sweet romance from the heart of me

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Running Wolves

Date: 10/3/2020 6:31:00 PM

Lovely as a daffodil

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/3/2020 6:56:00 PM

Awe, thank you Robert. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/17/2020 12:16:00 PM

There are some mornings when we do tend to linger in thought, but it's the dreams of love that come to us only in the evening. Beautiful, Brandy! Hugs, Carolyn

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/17/2020 7:33:00 PM

Carolyn, you are right. Dreams of love touch the heart even more, as evening falls. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/17/2020 11:51:00 AM

Beautifully crafted and created with rife imagination and intense fantasy - sensuous photo, and totally sensuous and sensitive poem. Well penned my friend. Hugs, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/17/2020 7:31:00 PM

Hi Jennifer, so kind of you to leave your wonderful thoughts on my poem. Such a sweet thing to say. There is a touch of sensuality in this. Thank you for your tender words. :) Hugs, Brandy

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/16/2020 5:11:00 PM

Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/16/2020 6:58:00 PM

Thank you Pashang. I appreciate you stopping by to read this little scribble of mine. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2020 5:12:00 PM

this is so lovely and very touching, Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/15/2020 7:31:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. :) Brandy

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/14/2020 4:11:00 AM

So touching and beautiful, Brandy. Panagiota Romios

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/14/2020 6:58:00 PM

Thank you Panagiota. Such a wonderful comment. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/12/2020 11:25:00 PM

"A shapely morning,"afternoon in full bloom," "each and every syllable second." So a wonderful tapestry of precisely expressed imagery Brandy. Thank you for sharing this romatic interlude!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/13/2020 6:20:00 PM

Sam, thank you for taking a moment to read this little scribble of mine. Your thoughts bring a smile. I appreciate you and your kindness. :) My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

John Watt

Date: 7/12/2020 8:52:00 PM

Pure Brandy perfection, a delight to read over and over, shaping words and phrases like a potter with wet clay. 'Keep me in the midnight longer, longer than expected' so evocative and romantic. This makes me smile, my friend. Hugs ~ John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/12/2020 9:19:00 PM

Such a wonderful compliment. Thank you John. "like a potter with wet clay" I am humbled. I am just scribbling from the heart. Your thoughts are so kind and tender. I am smiling along with you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Silent One

Date: 7/11/2020 7:42:00 AM

each and every syllable second... how precious, yet time waits for no one... lovely romantic poem...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/11/2020 7:55:00 PM

In this poem- time wraps around the heart. To be there for someone- in every moment. Of course. Thank you Silent One. :) Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 7/9/2020 7:54:00 PM

Beautiful write Brandy, tender moments keep us longer..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/9/2020 9:36:00 PM

Such moments caress the heart. Thank you Joseph. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 7/9/2020 2:03:00 PM

A wistful love very very artfully expressed. Exceptional verses, Branderz, this is one of your finest. Fave.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/9/2020 7:50:00 PM

Such a wonderful thing to say. I am just writing from the heart. Thank you Lawrence for your kind words. I appreciate you placing this little scribble in your favorites. :) Brandy