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daybreak down where the whip-poor-will sings cool, crisp late-spring morn
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Date: 5/28/2025 6:06:00 PM
Oh this is pretty, it reads like a beautiful first line of a song!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/29/2025 2:22:00 AM
Thank you, BJ, for the nice review. Yes, it could be the beginnings of a song. Sara K
Date: 5/26/2025 10:31:00 PM
Ah how beautiful dear sara! I clove the last line the most here: you do this form always so well! I hope you are doing well: sending you light always.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/27/2025 3:51:00 AM
IE, I'm not doing as well as when I was younger. I always need the Light. Sara K
Date: 5/26/2025 5:03:00 PM
Waking up to the sweet sound of birdsong on a spring morning is fantastic. Also, the sound of a nightingale is soothing to me. Excellent job, Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/27/2025 3:50:00 AM
Lasaad, I have never heard a nightingale sing. I don't think we have those here. Thank you for dropping by. Sara K
Date: 5/26/2025 12:20:00 PM
A day we can really feel
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/27/2025 3:49:00 AM
True, Andrea. Thanks for your visit. Sara K
Date: 5/25/2025 7:16:00 AM
That's a bird that really enchants.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/26/2025 4:13:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. Sara K
Date: 5/24/2025 1:38:00 PM
- Beautiful written, Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/24/2025 2:07:00 PM
Anne-Lise, your smile/s always make the day brighter. Sara K
Date: 5/24/2025 1:01:00 PM
Beautiful Sara. Your poem goes well with the picture
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/24/2025 2:06:00 PM
Oliver, your visit made my day. Sara K
Date: 5/24/2025 5:47:00 AM
Nothing like a sunny spring morning with the birds singing a morning wakeup song. I even like the caw of the blackbirds. Nice one Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/24/2025 2:05:00 PM
Why, Tom, such a nice review of my work. I appreciate your visit. Sara K
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