Cupid

cupid day inspires

us to dance seduction swayed ~

in our living room

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 2/21/2025 11:06:00 PM

The enchanting essence of love through shared tender moments.Very nice senryu.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2025 11:23:00 AM

Congrats with your romantic entry, dear. I am home if you want to come call me. I am not sure I have your number right on my phone

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/14/2025 1:55:00 PM

A few words that describes a lovely evening. Happy Valentine's day. love phyl

Jan Allison

Date: 2/10/2025 12:29:00 PM

aww so sweet and sensual CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2025 10:18:00 PM

A sensuous senryu, Caycay. Sorry I am so late getting to comments. It's been. Busy week. I miss you

Paige Hind

Date: 2/8/2025 5:58:00 PM

Beautiful! Just a short poem, but so beautiful

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/8/2025 7:02:00 AM

The queen of writing a Senryu and enter Cupid, a perfect introduction for him stylish and eloquently described. Lovely dear Cay Cay, oooh I LOVE having you back. Blessings, Jennifer.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/7/2025 9:17:00 PM

This is wonderful, CayCay! Very much enjoyed! Blessings.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2025 7:10:00 AM

Ahh!!! Romantic. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 2/6/2025 11:35:00 PM

I see you are flawless at alliterations, flows so well and is so well written, your senryu is stunning, i especially love the line “ slow dancing seduction swayed “ i can see that through your words, so soulful! Pleasure reading your senryu. Best wishes for the contest if this is for the contest. Sending you light always dear poetic soul

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/6/2025 11:24:00 PM

Oh how I missed your beautiful poetry. You exalted St Valentine's Day. Well done. Best for a win.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/6/2025 1:25:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your "Cupid's Day" write. Slow dancing in the living room sounds like fun. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day today and on Valentine's Day.................

Len Gasun

Date: 2/5/2025 7:56:00 PM

Beautifully romantic and sweet my dear poet friend Caycay. I immensely enjoyed your senryu. So glad to see you back my dear poet friend. Thanks a lot for sharing this. Thanks also for your visit. Hope you've a wonderful Cupid's Day. God bless! Hugs

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