Another Feather In My Cap

By day, I followed her around and watched her every move, for she was bigger than life itself. But when the sun went down, she would change into her uniform and go out into the summer evening. Busing it she'd go to the local factory and work on an assembly line. They made confectionery sweets there, and when the boss discarded them for being broken or imperfect, he allowed the staff to take them home to their families. I'd sit at home doing my homework, waiting for her shift to end. Quite often I would be too tired to stay up until midnight and since I had school the next day, I'd go to bed by nine. In the morning I would find a box of pastries called Palmiers in french palmyè, sitting on the kitchen table waiting to be enjoyed.
When the sun came up we would both sit at the kitchen with a tea in hand and talk before I had to go to school. When she hugged me she smelled of spun sugar with a touch of fixative from yesterday's hairspray. All around her was a peaceful presence, as I enjoyed the warmth of her capable strong hands. That was close to sixty years ago and still today if I stand by a bakery counter taking in the scent of cakes and sweets I can still recall my mother and the way she moonlighted just to make ends meet.
Another feather in my cap of feelgood memories from days of yonder. Tune in tomorrow for another story in my lifetime.

The End.
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Date: 7/2/2025 12:53:00 PM
What a wonderful write/story/picture. I bet to find a box of pastries was heavenly. Great memories are the best kind to have. Have a lovely day writing away...........
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Date: 7/2/2025 7:16:00 AM
A beautiful memory. Thank you for sharing this.
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Date: 7/2/2025 12:06:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Chetta, mom memories never die :)
Date: 7/2/2025 2:10:00 AM
a beautiful story indeed!
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Date: 7/2/2025 12:06:00 PM
thank you Arthur, I miss my mom, so many great memories of her and dad :)
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