Abortion

prayer from a womb
lifted whisper pleas for light

         You know me already

abortionsenryu

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/18/2023 6:04:00 PM

So sad, that many think there's no life in the womb. Indeed, every life is precious to God. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Hugs, Brandy

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/18/2023 7:13:00 PM

Millions of souls returned to sender... :o

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/18/2023 4:55:00 AM

How beautiful a child in the womb is..We weren't even born,and God already knew our names..A heartbeat in the womb is life.

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/18/2023 11:02:00 AM

Agreed. :-))

David Fisher

Date: 9/15/2023 5:31:00 PM

This is wonderful...it makes one think, which is partially the point I believe.

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/15/2023 9:56:00 PM

Indeed, pause and give thoughtful consideration. Thx, DF. :o/

Silent One

Date: 9/15/2023 12:00:00 PM

As Tommy said, you say so much in only a few words..

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/15/2023 3:17:00 PM

Thanks,S1. Rhetoric won’t solve this dilemma. :-/

Tom Woody

Date: 9/15/2023 6:43:00 AM

This is so good and with so few words. "You know me already..." Great line. I don't take a political stand on abortion, but certainly a moral and Biblical one. I can see some taking issue with your senryu, or avoiding it altogether. I say kudos

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/15/2023 8:57:00 AM

Opinions vary; not preaching. Evocative piece. Consider and make one’s choice. Thx. ;-/

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