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A Face Of Time


Natural beauty apparent

Weathered with time

A story book cover

Tales to tell with each creviced line

agebeautifulrhyme

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John Read

Date: 1/8/2025 4:54:00 AM

Growing old gracefully is the way, every wrinkle and line tells a story,have a lovely day Deb. xx

Deb M
Date: 1/8/2025 9:39:00 AM

Indeed they do John! Debx

John Lawless

Date: 1/7/2025 8:34:00 AM

A palm reader once told me she didn't need to read by palm she had already read my face...

Deb M
Date: 1/8/2025 9:40:00 AM

And how long did that take John! Debx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/6/2025 8:07:00 PM

You have told quite a tale in just four lines, Deb. :) gw

Deb M
Date: 1/8/2025 9:38:00 AM

Thanks BB! Debx

Terrell Martin

Date: 1/6/2025 2:30:00 PM

Hi Deb, This poem rings of John Keats "Ode to a Grecian Urn": "Beauty is truth, truth beauty,—that is all Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know." Thanks for a wonderful/thoughtful poem reminding me of Keats. You never fail to amaze.

Deb M
Date: 1/8/2025 9:41:00 AM

You are very kind Terrell ...thankyou...Debx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/6/2025 1:45:00 PM

sounds great, deb, but i'd still prefer a few less "creviced lines" on my face!

Deb M
Date: 1/8/2025 9:39:00 AM

That made me laugh Ilene!! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2025 11:52:00 AM

- I agree with you, Deb - In just a few years, the use of fillers and Botox in Norway has increased significantly ... almost no one has natural beauty anymore ... - hugs

Deb M
Date: 1/6/2025 1:07:00 PM

Natural beauty is authentic and real....there is so much beauty in an aged face but people do not see it anymore! Thankyou Sunshine....Debx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/6/2025 11:28:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Few words with much said. I still say, age is just a number. Beauty comes from within at any age. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away..........................

Deb M
Date: 1/6/2025 1:04:00 PM

Exactly Paula....beauty does come within! Thankyou...Debx

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