Girl in the snow


As, I was walking down this long dark road, the smell of fear in the air. As I pass no one notice me passing, they sitting on the porch talking about what happening the night before like usual. So I went on by my firend Sammantha came running over girl you wouldn'y never believe what happen to me. Last nite I went to this gig boyit was jamming like always the same guys there ever week on firday holding the wall. But there was this guy he just kept buying drinks all night my girl Tonya said you better which out, like what ever you jealous but anyway Dee there was something so weird this girl, I never seen her there before she had a kid with her my first thought was is she crazy or what. anyway this guy came out of the bathroom said in a harsh way let's go, girl I look at him how dear you disrespect that child like that, she look know more than 15 teen. So he grabe her and went out the door. I wanted to threw a can at his head. anyway I'm gone on and on, how was your night well my mind is heavy we just loss a cousin she was 60 years old she had so much life ever time you seen her she had a smile on her face never complaint not once, she had kindney disease for awhile. and dad he got to retired soon mother is not to happy about that. money is going to be tight. I just feel everything is falling on me, my older sister don't give a damn she don't get along with my mother or dad, something happening when she was growing up, she won't talk about it, so she runs the streets. my other sister which is my twin, we don't talk that much either what a family right. it hurts that are family is like this. girl it will get better, I know just trying to figure things out. your mother comes to you always I wish my mother was closs to me like yours is enough sad talk you want to go to the movies saturday night sure I will pick you up around 7:00 pm. and girl stop walking like a homely girl shut up just wanted to see that smile caught you later. So I kept walking the wind was started up snow falling heavy at times, I was going to ture back around and go home. But something inside of me kept me walking. I look to the right, I saw a child all cover in snow, I run over to her child where is your mother she respond with a tear her nose so red she point over by the tree in the back, her mother was cover in snow with blood all over her faces. holding the little child so closs to me, baby girl what happening my child, she just stared with tear's falling he hurted my mom and he left me to freeze to death. Oh my child I will keep you safe what is your name mother never give me a name, so I guess I am a nobody.

be continue: chaper 1

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