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A Night Under the Stars


INT. MOVIE THEATER - NIGHT

The dimly lit room hums with anticipation. LEO (17) sits fidgeting in his seat, his bright green eyes darting around, taking in the bustling crowd. He adjusts his messy brown hair, letting out a soft sigh. Next to him, EVAN (18) sits comfortably, exuding confidence. Evan’s hazel eyes sparkle with excitement.

LEO
(stuttering slightly)
So, um... are you excited for this one?

EVAN
(grinning)
Yeah! I heard it’s got a great twist at the end. Plus, it’s about friendship, which is always relatable, right?

Leo nods, but his gaze shifts toward the screen. As the previews roll, he glances at Evan, who is completely absorbed. Leo relaxes for a moment, feeling a buzz of comfort in Evan’s easy presence.


MONTAGE - MOVIE CLIPS & REACTIONS:

A romantic moment on screen, and Leo’s hand brushes against Evan's as they reach for popcorn. Both freeze for a beat, then glance at each other, smiling shyly before retreating their hands.

Cut to exciting action scenes where they both lean forward in their seats, laughing at the thrilling moments.

The film ends. The credits roll, and the lights brighten. Leo's heart races as he feels the warm weight of Evan's presence beside him.


EXT. PARK - LATER THAT NIGHT

The two boys walk out of the movie theatre, stepping into the cool night air. The stars twinkle above them, casting a gentle glow on the park ahead. The sound of rustling leaves fills the air as they make their way toward the swings.

EVAN
(looking up at the stars)
You know, they say every star out there has a story... like us.

Leo chuckles, his earlier anxiety melting away in the calm of the night.

LEO
Right, but I think some stars are just... really bad at telling their stories.

Evan laughs, the sound bright and infectious. They reach the swings, and Evan sits on one, motioning for Leo to join him. Leo hesitates for a second but then sits beside Evan, the distance between them narrowing.


INT. PARK - SWINGS - CONTINUOUS

They swing gently, the chains creaking softly. The moon casts a silver sheen on the ground.

EVAN
(playfully)
Alright, if your life were a movie, what would it be titled?

Leo leans back, pondering as he watches the stars swirl above.

LEO
(smirking)
“The Boy Who Tamed His Anxiety”. What about you?

EVAN
(grinning)
“Living Out Loud”.

Leo turns to Evan, a mixture of admiration and intrigue in his eyes.

LEO
I love that. You really do live out loud.

Evan shrugs, a sense of humility shining through his confident demeanor.

EVAN
Only because I have to. I don’t want anyone to feel alone—like I did sometimes.

The moment hangs between them, charged with unspoken understanding.


They swing silently for a moment, letting the cool breeze settle around them. Evan breaks the silence, nudging Leo playfully.

EVAN
You know... I think it’s really brave, how you stand up for your friends.

Leo blushes, glancing down at his freckled hands.

LEO
Thanks, but I don’t always feel brave... just trying to do what’s right.

Evan looks at Leo intently, his hazel eyes shining.

EVAN
That’s brave enough. And it means a lot to people. You mean a lot to people.

Their gazes lock for a moment longer than comfortable. Leo swallows hard, feeling the warmth bubbling inside him.


EXT. PARK - PATHWAY - CONTINUOUS

They get off the swings, walking along the dimly lit path. The atmosphere is filled with hints of laughter from nearby late-night picnics and whispers of the wind through the trees.

LEO
(nervously)
So, what’s next for you? Any big plans after high school?

EVAN
(thoughtful)
Maybe psychology... I want to help teens around the world. Seems like more people should care about mental health, you know?

LEO
(with admiration)
You really do care about everyone and everything...

Evan stops walking and turns to face Leo, determination in his eyes.

EVAN
And you should care about yourself too, Leo.

Leo looks down, feeling the weight of Evan’s words.


EXT. PARK - NEAR THE BENCH - CONTINUOUS

They arrive at a bench, where they sit side-by-side. The conversation flows freely, punctuated by laughter and shared stories. As the night grows older, the space between them feels electric.

EVAN
(leaning closer)
I know it sounds silly, but... I really enjoy our talks. Feels like I can be myself around you.

Leo's green eyes widen, surprised but pleased by the admission.

LEO
I feel the same!

Evan gazes at him, and the world around them fades. They inch closer, the moment feeling both thrilling and terrifying.


EXT. PARK - BENCH - MOMENTS LATER

Evan gently reaches for Leo’s hand, intertwining their fingers. Leo's heart races.

EVAN
(softly)
Can I... kiss you?

Leo nods, breathless. Their lips meet—soft, tentative, then growing more confident. The kiss is sweet, tasting of popcorn and dreams, sending shivers down Leo’s spine. A perfect moment under the starlit sky.


They pull apart, breaths mingling in the cool air. Leo's freckled cheeks are flush as he meets Evan's warm gaze.

LEO
(nervous laughter)
Best first date ever.

EVAN
(smiling)
I think it’s just the beginning.

They sit hand in hand, hearts ablaze with the possibilities of what lies ahead, the stars above winking at their newfound connection.

FADE OUT.


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