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Read Poems by Louwil Rivera

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Outcome of War

Look at the hands of the boy
He held's a gun not a toy 
Look where he played
Full of bullets and granades
Tell whats his games 
Find a victim and then aim
Look what he just did
Pulled the trigger and killed a kid
Some stood up and stared 
Like none ever cared
Its normal they say
In this cruel war today

Copyright © Louwil Rivera | Year Posted 2007

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  1. Date: 3/23/2016 10:05:00 PM

    Louwil, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
  1. Date: 1/16/2016 6:03:00 PM

    louwil, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT**

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