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Second Hand Smoke

Iron lung life isn’t so bad
But I most admit, I’m a little bit mad
All those nights in the bars just a chok’in
To hell with this second hand smok’in
Now, I wish I had enjoyed just a drag
Marlboro, Winston, in England they’re Fags
Not one little puff have I ever tried
But thanks to second hand smoke
My lungs have been fried
Iron lung life isn’t so bad
Maybe I’m cool
It’s the upcoming fad

Copyright © Brett Allen | Year Posted 2017


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  1. Date: 10/1/2017 12:02:00 PM

    Hope it's not the upcoming fad. You might want to look at my poem dated 8/13/17 The Iron Lung. Very nicely written poem.