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Atonement

And who are we, ignoble birthed, 
knowing as we must, 
all elements of earth
laid down in divine trust
berthed in perfect form-
stupendous souls made from dust. 
Finger of God made so much of it
Divine capsule of design
Then the human being lost his mind, 
lost the way for humankind. 
Blood sacrifice cries from the ground
Stones will cry out if they must
What would they say if they could sound
out hope of humane recreation? 
Lust for life is never past the point 
of no return to final destination. 

Atonement is a living law, on its own. 
It is impossible to bleed life from a stone. 


Aqua Marine. 02/04/2024.

Copyright © Aqua Marine | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 4/9/2024 2:06:00 AM

A great subject and worthy of contemplation.
Date: 4/5/2024 7:52:00 AM

A lot to contemplate. Great write. We've wondered so far from God's original plan. So sad... the state of affairs now. Thanks for the visit to my page.
Date: 4/5/2024 6:45:00 AM

Yes, I think humanity has lost its collective mind. Still there are glimmers of Hope interspersed. I hang onto that hope. A thought provoking piece.
Date: 4/4/2024 3:45:00 PM

Powerful poetry, Aqua. Thanks for sharing this truth with us. Your poem flowed well and was an inspiring way to share your thoughts on atonement. I'll be following your poetry to get to know you and your thoughts. I hope you'll follow mine as well. A poet friend to be, Bill p.s. The commenter below, Sara Etgen Baker is my wife. We both write poetry.
Date: 4/1/2024 5:09:00 PM

Such a deep, thought provoking poem! These words struck a chord with me: Then the human being lost his mind, lost the way for humankind. I especially liked Stones will cry out if they must What would they say if they could sound out hope Grateful for your words this evening, blessings, Sara

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