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A Pond’s Melody


into melody
jumps the frog beyond the reel
slow dragonflies goosed and ducked


a lit symphony
campfires dance like sun and moon
in ripples of stone and wind


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Contest:Show me a Choka
Sponsor:Nette Onclaud 
Written:06.08.25

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Susan Ashley Date: 8/1/2025 8:40:00 PM Dear Rob, your verses create an enchanting atmosphere full of beautiful imagery that is both animated and serene and touch upon the senses in a wonderful way. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Sam Kauffman Date: 7/25/2025 11:40:00 AM Truly you have captured the sounds and "melody" of the life of a pond with frogs and dragonflies and rippling waters in symphonic elegance. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings to you.
Karen Jones Date: 7/25/2025 8:05:00 AM I love the second stanza so much! The imagery throughout the entire write is delightful! Best wishes in the contest!
Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/25/2025 6:06:00 AM Best of luck in the contest Rob. Thank as well for my placement in your contest for my Cup of Empty poem. If you are on UTube please look up the video that was made for it. My friend and composer Alan Johnson did an amazing job.
Brandy Nicole Date: 7/20/2025 4:42:00 PM The frog jumps and the dragonflies goosed and ducked. :) Sounds like they're having fun. This is cute, creative and clever. The melody lingers on. My best to you, Rob. :) Hugs, Brandy
Len Gasun Date: 6/13/2025 6:48:00 PM Oh, this is enchanting my dear poet friend! I love it! Big warm Congrats on your win too! Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs
Valsa George Date: 6/11/2025 9:36:00 PM Your depiction of life and sounds in and around the pool is captivating. Congratulations on your win, dear Rob.
Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/11/2025 1:11:00 PM Parts of this I really love for the imagery, Rob. Congrats for your win.
Howard Kerr Date: 6/11/2025 8:35:00 AM Rob, Sorry for the delay in responding to your notification on my entry. First and foremost a genuine gratitude is your due for your generous comment on my piece. But being a judge can be onerous and I value all placements. Your entry is breathtaking in its sweep, vision and detail. I imagined myself at the scene of composition Well done Howard
Maclawrence Famuyiwa Date: 6/11/2025 7:48:00 AM Nice imagery "campfires dance like sun and moon...". Congrats.
Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/11/2025 7:26:00 AM A more complete picture of life around the pond! Congrats!
Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/10/2025 10:48:00 PM What a gem. Congrats, Rob
Tom Woody Date: 6/8/2025 1:32:00 PM This has a duck duck goose kind of feel to it. Not sure why. Nice choka Rob
Jan Allison Date: 6/8/2025 11:11:00 AM excellent ink Rob, I'm definitely a slow dragonfly lol ! hugs jan.

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