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You Ain't Getting Jack

You Ain't Gettin Jack!

You wanted my heart, soul
On Layaway...
That ain't gonna get
You can't afford the full
Price of Love? 
You ain't gonna get little
By little...Jack! 
And, uh, just a thought...
How many other Layaways
Are you checking on...? 
Mr. Jack be Nimble, 
Mr. Jack be Quick, 
Fixin to get your ass
By Love's flaming
Don't knock, knock, knock...
Cause I'm gone, gone, gone. 

Copyright © Elysabeth Faslund | Year Posted 2013


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  1. Date: 5/22/2016 5:41:00 PM

    Elysabeth, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*"
  1. Date: 1/24/2014 2:24:00 PM

    Enjoyed your poem Elysie xxx
  1. Date: 1/1/2014 7:24:00 PM

    You tell him sister. good for you. well done. Pete.
  1. Date: 12/30/2013 10:03:00 AM

    Hilarious! Happy New Year!
  1. Date: 12/9/2013 10:17:00 AM

    HA! Awesome! "How many other layaways are you checking on", HILARIOUS!