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I am sorry for leaving u

I am sorry for leaving u

cause we cant be together, 

i am sorry for leaving u, 

cause i want u to stride further, 

i am sorry for leaving u, 

cause if i don't, 

the world would start leaving u, 

i am sorry for leaving u, 

cause i don't want u to lose

which was so hard to achieve, 

i am sorry for leaving u, 

without a goodbye, 

cause i was afraid your tears might stop my try, 

i am happy to leave u, 

with others to take care, 

with a request to forget me as a nightmare

Copyright © Eleza Young | Year Posted 2013


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  1. Date: 2/19/2016 11:15:00 PM

    eleza, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
  1. Date: 12/20/2015 3:48:00 PM

    Eleza, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
  1. Date: 1/20/2015 7:27:00 PM

    very nice poem, enjoyed very much
  1. Date: 10/11/2013 1:57:00 PM

    A nice poem! The jilting feel with a sacrificing tinge. Fine job! Do read my latest too
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 7:14:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading again, congratulations.
  1. Date: 7/24/2013 1:34:00 PM

    the ending is very nice, congrats.
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 1:40:00 AM

    Welcome to the Soup Asira....thanks for stopping by and reading a poem of mine too.....Shaz
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 1:30:00 AM

    touching...intense emotions in very few words..i loved it..thanks
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 12:59:00 PM

    Very emotional poem....well done....
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 11:55:00 AM

    - A sad goodbye ....... - however, you write well. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:01:00 AM

    Very sad, check the form it may be more of a free verse. The poem itself is very moving