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Read Poems by Linus Nguyen

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THE LAST ACT

“Hello, sweetie, what’s your name? 
Would you like some lollies?
Or my huge brown sugar cane?
Such a nice little girl!
Who’s your daddy
talking to?
What is he doing leaving you to play with yourself?
Are you scared? 
Sad?
Lonely?
It’s alright, honey, you’ve got me.

I’ll ride you 
to the top of those rainbow hills
where pink unicorns and flying octopuses live.
I’ll take you 
where the stars align, and the sky is velvet with glamour.
All my care is you and all my pleasure yours.
Hands,
Put yours in mine
I will show you the world.”

“Sir, you promised me wonders 
Yet I’ve felt nothing but pain.
Please send me back home to my family
where we first began.”

“If life were that simple, I wouldn’t have needed you
Should’ve known better than talking to strangers
Oh now you do!
Did it never occur to you that all is just a silly game?
The one that loses is also the one who gained.
Next
to you I lied.
I filled you
with sweet words, and finally made you come. 
You’re my one in many conquests,
I your priceless lesson. 
Now I’ll make you scream till you pass out,
still no-one will hear your cries.
I might as well kill you.
I might as well die!”

Copyright © Linus Nguyen | Year Posted 2013


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  1. Date: 1/23/2016 6:27:00 PM

    LINUS, I'm just stopping by to enjoy your poem. Have a wonderful day. ** LINDA**
  1. Date: 11/18/2015 7:50:00 PM

    Linus, thank you for sharing. Hugs... SKAT
  1. Date: 4/17/2013 10:45:00 PM

    Welcome to the poetry soup, LINUS . My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to my latest contest... called the “7 wonders” I ENJOY GIVING new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Thanks for your time *LINDA
  1. Date: 4/17/2013 8:43:00 PM

    Linus:-), Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT

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