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love rule

This is your rule forever 
This is my agreement forever 
You keep your distance 
I keep my promise 

How much i wish you could break your line 
How much i wish I could across your mind 
Your red rays make me weak 
My sorrow flow through your sick 

You save your smile for your love 
I lock my heart for my life 
This is you forever 
This is me forever 

Copyright © Bar Zhao | Year Posted 2014


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  1. Date: 2/15/2016 12:08:00 PM

    Bar, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
  1. Date: 11/15/2015 10:36:00 PM

    Bar, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
  1. Date: 9/24/2014 2:34:00 PM

    Very intricate, deep powerful piece! Excellent write! Pandita
  1. Date: 7/26/2014 4:54:00 PM

    WAOW WAO.... you keep your distance i keep my promise ..beautiful !
  1. Date: 5/15/2014 10:41:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart