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Dilemma

So lost-not able to find
Helpless--a drive by shooting--
Regaining regrouping needed--
Lost to myself--where did you go?
 
Something tearing inside--fragmented--
No tools for repairing the breakage--
Lost in turmoil, confusion lives strong--
No retrieving what is lost--forever comes to mind--
 
A maze of thoughts--
Hazy at best--
No understanding--meaning cannot be found--
No trusting, lost in bewilderment--
 
No hope, no surviving--
Effort missing, sensibility lacking
Lost to no one, no one lost
Me is in the heart of it
 
Lost lost lost
Agony lives strong
Disintegrating in anguish--
Nothing to lose; nothing to gain--
 
Darkness/light no difference--
 

Copyright © Mona Hakim | Year Posted 2013


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  1. Date: 2/9/2016 12:22:00 AM

    Mona, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:19:00 PM

    Hope its all better soon.
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 11:01:00 AM

    Mona, a touching poem that is well written. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2013 10:38:00 AM

    I could drown with you in this write, but let's not, let's wait each new day brings new hope. Feel better, Light & Love

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