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It's your day again

It’s your day again

I’ll watch you walk across that stage 
as I think about your first school days.
You were so little and naive then
with your favourite food tin
and you accept
you called JOY.
You’ve grown taller and intelligent,
Some are dreamers 
Some are talented
You are both
The complexion still the same
But your smile is the same.
No one will clap louder
when they call your name on 7th
Boyfriend will be watching in close range 
I have never thought so close to me
But these time,
Its home.

Copyright © tim duncan | Year Posted 2012


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  1. Date: 2/24/2016 4:12:00 PM

    tim duncan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:53:00 AM

    real lover i guess, nice piece
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 2:45:00 AM

    Nice. Thanks
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 2:31:00 AM

    Lovely and sweet poem Tim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)