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Read Poems by counselor mahmoud

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I just want one more day with you

I just want one more day with you 
I'm so sad and depressed
Is all I want to do is rest
I go to sleep at night
But my dreams I just can't fight

I think of you lying in that bed
And wonder if there is anything I could have said
I wish you were still here
But I know that you are still near

I love you more than you know
I just wish you didn't have to go
I just want one more day with you
And I know thats what you would have wanted too

I miss you more and more each day
There is so much more we had to say
I know I will see you again
But my life is just started to begin

Copyright © counselor mahmoud | Year Posted 2012


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  1. Date: 2/15/2016 3:34:00 PM

    mahmoud, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE
  1. Date: 11/20/2015 1:35:00 AM

    Counselor, a wonderful poem to read. SKAT
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:20:00 PM

    Counselor,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

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