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Alone Without Light

Dark and late, no presence of light
Wondering around as if without sight

I'm walking alone down this straight dusty road
Just me, my rifle, and this bearing load

I can hear nothing; no chatter, no talking
No children out playing, I'm nervous but keep walking

This dirt, this sand, this Godforsaken heat
I'm lonely, hungry and tired, I need to rest my feet

I've made it to town, still there is no spark
I've made it to town, and I'm still in the dark

Hours seem to pass, I begin accepting my plight
But back down that road I see a tiny spec of light

Copyright © Susan Andersen | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 4/7/2026 12:48:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Date: 3/11/2016 1:06:00 PM

Susan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
Date: 7/21/2015 3:49:00 PM

SUSAN, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"
Date: 6/21/2012 6:26:00 PM

Thank you to everyone! This was my first poem, so I wasn't sure about what kind it was.
Date: 6/16/2012 9:26:00 AM

nicely done Susan..this is a couplet...check out the resources section
Date: 6/15/2012 12:09:00 PM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Susan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
Date: 6/11/2012 11:53:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup, Susan ! Like your poem, you written well. - Thank you for sharing it - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/10/2012 8:40:00 PM

hope in that light at the end of the tunnel, Susan. Good ending.

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