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Last evening,

Standing on the beach,

Watching the waves making rhythmic beat.

                                               Suddenly it came with wide,white grin

                                               Tenderly touching and left again.

Was about to leave,

When it said-

Hey gal,

don't go too far.

I will come back again.


There it was,  with the wide,white grin.

                                                   Waves so amazing.

Copyright © Mad hu | Year Posted 2012


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  1. Date: 2/21/2016 10:42:00 AM

    mad Hu, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
  1. Date: 12/22/2015 8:11:00 PM

    mad Hu :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 8:00:00 AM

    Amazing write. Like waves, let your poems splash here. Tfs
  1. Date: 9/15/2012 10:29:00 AM

    Very well written Poem Mad hu. Your waves definitely created a rhythmic beat with the sound of splashing waves. Beautiful write. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....Madhu
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 10:25:00 PM

    Good idea to personify the ocean waves. Good write.
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 8:14:00 AM

    And like your waves, one indeed will keep coming back to your poetry. awesome.
  1. Date: 9/4/2012 3:42:00 AM

    i feel the tender splash of your words, mad.. truly splendid as always!..:) huggs!
  1. Date: 9/3/2012 10:37:00 AM

    I love this one, the waves personified. a great poem with a surprising feel to it!
  1. Date: 9/3/2012 6:54:00 AM

    great write about the waves, they are beautiful. Thanks for stoping by. Lucilla
  1. Date: 9/3/2012 4:54:00 AM

    Watching the waves ..... I like it too.... A well written poem. - Xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/2/2012 11:27:00 PM

    I so luv the beach and waves which crest to different shapes and designa like the fluid motion of your words luv .. most enjoyable creation Mad Hu ..