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Read Poems by David Rombo

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OPEN HEART

Pen's on the paper, 
I pour my heart out and I hope you get a taste of,
How I feel these words that I speak are real,
This is my soul in couple of minutes in a rhythm, 

As I talk to you hoping you will listen when I speak,
Maybe I could find myself some peace on release,
Cos these feelings in me keep on clouding my belief,
And I still live conventional, but it's no relief,

I'm falling, like teardrops or raindrops falling,
I can't control it, it's weighing me down,
Heavy my heart, it's the size of my fist,
But it's like handcuffs and it's weighing down my wrist,

Please show me if what I feel is real,
I want to touch it, Coz maybe then I can grab it,
Spin it around, punch it and throw it in the garbage, 
Slaughter it, cut it in half like I would be splitting cabbage, 

Coz I hate these feelings that make me want to say I love you,
You broke me, spit on my heart,  cursed and kicked me,
Beat me like a drum when you told me you don't want me,
But still I can't get over you, guess you meant more to me than I thought.

Copyright © David Rombo | Year Posted 2014

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  1. Date: 2/24/2016 6:37:00 PM

    David, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
  1. Date: 1/3/2016 11:52:00 PM

    David Rombo, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
  1. Date: 6/9/2014 3:34:00 PM

    Quite impressive piece, David. The honest feeling of yearning for that speicial someone, is deeply expressed in this poem. Great imagery, enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

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