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Empty Promises

Empty promises which hold on weight
Blowing aimlessly in whatever direction the winds chooses

Whispering lies and deceiving the most strongest of minds
The hollowness entangled within your lies torture the very innocence contained throughout
my dreams

Shattering every existence of hope
Launching them into an abyss of darkness 
Surrounded by a sea of victims who have suffered a similar fate

No greater than my own misguided trust

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Skat A Date: 6/22/2016 11:13:00 PM JIMMIE, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your awesome words today. ~SKAT~
Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/6/2011 3:26:00 PM Creative and interesting write on empty promises, Jimmie
Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/4/2011 2:49:00 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site and its many features as I have enjoyed your creative poetry tonight..continue to share words with luv..
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/4/2011 8:27:00 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jimmie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

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