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Read Poems by Don El Yudo

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Sitting On The Fence

I was sitting on the fence
When you were passing
I thought I could get to you
When you were smiling
But it seems you are far away
From my love

I was charmed by your moves
As you were walking
I thought I could feel the love
In you
But as you walked and passed me
My world became empty

I was sitting on the fence
Watching you disappear
With a love waiting by the corner
I cried out my heart
Cause I lost you to another forever.

Copyright © Don El Yudo | Year Posted 2011


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  1. Date: 3/3/2016 11:05:00 PM

    Don, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
  1. Date: 1/21/2016 7:08:00 AM

    Great work of poetry. Checkout Don El Yudo's complete anthology titled "Love Cry" published in amazon createspace & kindle.
  1. Date: 1/21/2016 7:06:00 AM

    Great work of poetry. Checkout Don El Yudo's complete anthology titled "Love Cry" published in amazon createspace & kindle.
  1. Date: 1/12/2016 12:09:00 PM

    wow, this is a great poem... Love it.... SKAT ...
  1. Date: 6/15/2011 6:20:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Don. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol