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You shine so bright

I love hearing your exhale sighs, 
 I love the way it's like a song,
 In out.  In out. 
Harmonizing with each breath in. 
 It comforts me knowing 
 you're right there. Still breathing. 
And we will see another day 
 together again tomorrow. 
I love the way you need me,
 Just like I need you. 
 We rely on eachother. 
We are only human.. From dust to dust. 
But for now, I cherish this every moment
 I am able to spend with you.
You are a light that shines in me. 
And I'll love you even after My heart
 turns to dust.

Copyright © Dont GiveIn | Year Posted 2015


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  1. Date: 6/5/2016 10:01:00 PM

    Dont GiveIn, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*