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A Bottle Savior

This poem was written by my daughter of eleven years old she wrote it for her 
grandparent whom she has never met as they live in another state.  
                     
                                   A bottle savior

A bottle, a piece of paper, a pencil,and an a big ocean blue
sent out to a savior,and a guardian too.
Hoped to be found on a great special day,
To be rescued by that loyal responder, both kind and ungray.
Please, understand you dont have to send gifts, just your hope,
love, trust and caring.
To take a risk both scarey and daring
That leaves only one question for you,
will you be my saveior and Guardian too?

                          Nicole DeLong
                            10-26-05    11yrs

Copyright © Deb Delong | Year Posted 2005


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Date: 5/10/2016 9:48:00 PM

Deb Delong, you have a great way of expressing yourself through poetry, XOX ~LINDA~
Date: 5/8/2016 2:26:00 AM

deb delong, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT
Date: 1/31/2012 1:07:00 AM

Beautiful Poem. It left me in awe. Thank you for sharing this with the world.

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